Peer Review #1

Laura this is a fantastically contextually relevant piece! I thoroughly enjoyed your personification of Mother Nature and the use of inclusive first person plural. The imagery of the horseman of the apocalypse is most apt for the pandemic we currently face. I was at first confused at your use of ‘finite’ in the final line, as to me the concept of beauty in nature has an enduring, transcendental quality, but that lead to the realisation you are highlighting the risk it faces from human beings. Nicely done. Restricted as we are, the Earth may prove to be cleaner for it than it has been for some time.

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