Peer Review 2

You’ve done an amazing job of capturing the (very flawed) thoughts of Mars in this moment. I appreciate the way you have captured his arrogance so that almost the entirety of his thoughts revolves around himself. It reflects the painting itself, how Rhea is depicted in cool blues and white while being surrounded with the hot reds of Mars.  Considering how he’s lifted a shawl which covered her, the words you’ve given him ring even more hollow in an effective way. The choice to place the final line in a paragraph of its own is a nice emphasis that is ominously chilling.

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